LS: the Beginning

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Kelvin O'Ralph, Jun 15, 2011 - 296 pages
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A handshake between strangers has never held so much promise for discovery.When Stephen Wilson meets Lisa Morgan at his new school in Sloutenville, it is the simple act of extending his hand in greeting that flips both of their worlds upside-down. With the gesture, both discover that in some way they are connected, and that they share the ability to manipulate the elements, fire and water. Though their abilities vary, they share the gift of telepathy allowing them to communicate without words, which creates a bond between them stronger than either had expected.As the two begin to spend more and more time together David, Lisa's ex, becomes wild with jealousy, lunching multiple attacks on Lisa. In the fight against the dangers that await them around every corner, Stephen and Lisa soon discover that they are up against much greater odds than they had originally known, and that their struggles are far from over.
  

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The writing is excellent. - Goodreads
Also, I found that the ending was really abrupt. - LibraryThing
It is the love story that mostly sticks with me. - Goodreads
Mr. O'Ralph obviously has promise as a writer. - LibraryThing
I like the simple writing as the story unfolds. - LibraryThing
As the novel progressed the writing improved. - LibraryThing

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User Review  - krizia_lazaro - LibraryThing

This is a book I did not like from the start. First, the grammar was bad. It was not ungrammatical all the time but some times. I do not have perfect grammar but i think if you're planning on becoming ... Read full review

Review: The Beginning (LS #1)

User Review  - Janet - Goodreads

The story was interesting and I'm curious to see what happens to the characters, but the writing is HORRIBLE! The author narrates kind of like an instruction manual and kind of like he's not from ... Read full review

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Kelvin O'Ralph is currently studying a bachelor's degree at a university in England, UK. He had always preferred writing to speaking, because he believed more could be said with the use of a pen. Kelvin wrote his first novel in three months, and edited it in nine months. Meanwhile, he searched for a literary agent to represent his first book. It seems really difficult for the young aspiring author, and he prays that one day his prayers would be answered.During the editing process of his first book, Kelvin began writing a novella. He couldn't do without creating a story. Presently, that novella is published on Amazon kindle, in the attempt to make a name for himself. People who have read Kelvin's stories are compelled to believe the young author will someday make it in the publishing industries.

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